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This is not the shooting I mentioned in my last journal!
spring is coming.
So, the sun was setting and the cherry blossoms, which smell extremly good, where sunbathing in front of my window. What am I supposed to do then?!
I made it all so intentional, every setting, every pose ... it was so easy! I was done after around 10 or 12 shots!
I am really happy about how it turned out, the editing was fun!
Title is german and means something like 'Flower child'
I am sad about the blurry blossom though.
Tell me what you think!
unedited version:
[link]
photography & edit (c) me
model: me
spring is coming.
So, the sun was setting and the cherry blossoms, which smell extremly good, where sunbathing in front of my window. What am I supposed to do then?!
I made it all so intentional, every setting, every pose ... it was so easy! I was done after around 10 or 12 shots!
I am really happy about how it turned out, the editing was fun!
Title is german and means something like 'Flower child'
I am sad about the blurry blossom though.
Tell me what you think!
unedited version:
[link]
photography & edit (c) me
model: me
Image size
3888x2592px 5.73 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 1000D
Shutter Speed
1/64 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
55 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Mar 25, 2011, 5:49:20 PM
Lens
EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
Sensor Size
22mm
© 2011 - 2024 NikolasBrummer
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Hello Nikko!
For a very long time, I've wished to write a critique to you, even though I don't really have much things to 'critique' about your pictures, which really inspires me, but I'll try my best <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Aww"/>
For a start, I'd like to point out the improvement you've made by editing the picture, even though the original picture is beautiful, I liked how you added to the whole picture a more warm feeling, which really fits the picture.
The picture itself looks very sweet to me, and the fact that we can notice the veins of your hand really gives a positive effect to the picture, because from my perspective it makes the picture way more mature, showing that you are giving affection in a very serious, but sweet way.
I also like the way you've framed yourself, and the bokeh in the background is just lovely.
The only flaw I see in the picture would maybe be that at the very end of the flowers we can see it moved, but it's a minor flaw which doesn't really affect the picture, I guess sometimes I'm too fussy!
All in all, I find this shot a very emotional, well-executed and lovely one with a really sweet message <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Aww"/>