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fallen leaves

The leaves flutter in time to the
screaming and shouting, laughing and talking people;
each red-gold memory dancing a mid-air waltz to
celebrate the day we separated.
Floating away like our love once did -
slowly, quietly, they leave only a barren body bared
for the ache to follow.

Even the winds moaned their last signs of life into the hurricane
of depression; the cold heartache of loneliness.
Barefoot, but I don't feel life and every step I take
whispered the end.

you said that "hope is not the thing in the sky",
but it was moonbeam fingers that brushed away
the hanging clouds and set up the shining stars,
too bright to look a

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Submitted: April 2, 2012
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_{you move. i move.
you whisper. i whisper.
you smile. i smile.
you wither. i wither.
i am not me. i am not you.
i am
the perfect imitation.

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_{photography & edit (c) me
model: me
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Critique by *BeauCyphre Apr 3, 2012, 10:26:57 PM

I always love it when a photography's able to capture a legend, and here you seem to have found Peter Pan, and this guy's definitely in Neverland. Peter's always been close to nature, and this boy's spirit seems to be so close to all of us that looking at him sometimes feels like watching a mirror image - at least when we're dreaming about our world, how it could be, how it should be to feel better in it. Maybe this is a world for boys and girls to become one, and so your character strikes a pose that's beyond the typical image of a boy or a girl. It's deeply human, and we've forgotten about that. Thanks for reminding us of Kensington Gardens.

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Critique by ~MissPreRaphaelites Apr 2, 2012, 1:45:44 PM

I personally love this, but I know it's a matter of taste as there are many similar photographs out there. I think the fact that the face is not the focal point of this photograph is what makes it intriguing, draws the viewer in. Instead we are drawn to the hand, and the fragility of the torso, and consequently the fragility of the branch and therefore nature itself. Only on second glace do we notice the face and the black eyes which seem to tell a story. The dots of flowers may be snow at first glance, because the eye is preoccupied with the rawness of the body. Great work! Going straight into my favourites!

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~emyl00 Mar 19, 2013 Student

This is absolutely beautiful,

*RamonGonzalez Feb 18, 2013

You are very talented Nikolas. I one day hope to be as good as you and keep on with my photography. Thank you for inspiring me and to help me move on with my work.